My best winter holiday essay

My best winter holiday essay

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My winter holiday [narative]

Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun. I strongly believe that all students and teaching staff are looking for winter holiday because it is a break for we all. We can have more free time to do what we want during this period of time. We can sleep and stay up as long as we want to and don’t need to worry about getting up late for class the next day morning

.I had always dreamed about going to France and last winter holiday my dream came true.

It was the evening of December 19, when my parents told me that we are going to France for one week in our holiday. I couldn’t believe my ears what I just heard. I asked they again if is not making it up, but they said they already purchased tickets online and made plans. On 21th May we departed Berlin and headed towards our first destination, Mont Blanc mounten. As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes. We stayed in the 5-star hotel near the moutain. Next day we hired a helicopter for a trip to see the sorrounds. It was simply amazing. Last day was fantastic too because I’ve drived a Snowmobile and it was really fun.

My holiday was exciting and full of joy. I enjoyed it immensely. I am looking forward to going there again soon.

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Re: My winter holiday [narative]

Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun. I strongly believe that all students and teaching staff are looking for winter holiday because it is a break for we us all. We can have more free time to do what we want during this period of time. We can sleep and stay up as long as we want to and don’t need to worry about getting up late for class the next day morning for the next day morning classes.

I had always dreamed about going to France and last winter holiday my dream came true.

It was the evening of December 19, when my parents told me that we are going to France for one week in our holiday. I couldn’t believe my ears what I just heard. I asked they again if is not making it up, but they said they we have already purchased tickets online and made plans. On 21th 21st May we departed Berlin and headed towards our first destination, Mont Blanc mounten mountain(i guess u wrote mountain) . As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes. We stayed in the 5-star hotel near the moutain mountain. Next day we hired a helicopter for a trip to see the sorrounds surrounds. It was simply amazing. Last day was fantastic too because I’ve drived drove (use the second form of drive in past tense) a Snowmobile and it was really fun.

My holiday was exciting and full of joy. I enjoyed it immensely. I am looking forward to going there again soon. again visit those places soon.

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Okay i have corrected ur mistakes.. u have to work on ur spell mistakes and ur sentence are bit jumbled up so try to make it clear, u should place the words in sequence in the sentences that will make more sense, I hope i have helped u GOOD Luck and keep practising.

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My winter holiday [narative]

Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun. I strongly believe that all students and teaching staff are looking for winter holiday because it is a break for we all. We can have more free time to do what we want during this period of time. We can sleep and stay up as long as we want to and don’t need to worry about getting up late for class the next day morning

.I had always dreamed about going to France and last winter holiday my dream came true.

It was the evening of December 19, when my parents told me that we are going to France for one week in our holiday. I couldn’t believe my ears what I just heard. I asked they again if is not making it up, but they said they already purchased tickets online and made plans. On 21th May we departed Berlin and headed towards our first destination, Mont Blanc mounten. As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes. We stayed in the 5-star hotel near the moutain. Next day we hired a helicopter for a trip to see the sorrounds. It was simply amazing. Last day was fantastic too because I’ve drived a Snowmobile and it was really fun.

My holiday was exciting and full of joy. I enjoyed it immensely. I am looking forward to going there again soon.

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Re: My winter holiday [narative]

Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun. I strongly believe that all students and teaching staff are looking for winter holiday because it is a break for we us all. We can have more free time to do what we want during this period of time. We can sleep and stay up as long as we want to and don’t need to worry about getting up late for class the next day morning for the next day morning classes.

I had always dreamed about going to France and last winter holiday my dream came true.

It was the evening of December 19, when my parents told me that we are going to France for one week in our holiday. I couldn’t believe my ears what I just heard. I asked they again if is not making it up, but they said they we have already purchased tickets online and made plans. On 21th 21st May we departed Berlin and headed towards our first destination, Mont Blanc mounten mountain(i guess u wrote mountain) . As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes. We stayed in the 5-star hotel near the moutain mountain. Next day we hired a helicopter for a trip to see the sorrounds surrounds. It was simply amazing. Last day was fantastic too because I’ve drived drove (use the second form of drive in past tense) a Snowmobile and it was really fun.

My holiday was exciting and full of joy. I enjoyed it immensely. I am looking forward to going there again soon. again visit those places soon.

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Okay i have corrected ur mistakes.. u have to work on ur spell mistakes and ur sentence are bit jumbled up so try to make it clear, u should place the words in sequence in the sentences that will make more sense, I hope i have helped u GOOD Luck and keep practising.

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Winter holidays

Winter Holidays
Do you like the winter holidays? Well I do many people enjoy the winter holidays for different reasons. I enjoy the winter holidays because there is no school, you can spend time with your family and you can enjoy the winter season.
First of all, you have no stress. You could spend your time playing video games and sports. We also don’t have homework which means we have more free time. We have no school that means we don’t have to be in classes that we don’t enjoy.
During the winter holidays anther great thing is that we get to spend time with family. We also get the chance to travel with your family and visit places like New York, Los Angeles, and Quebec. Also one of the great things we get to do is that we get to spend time with your siblings by playing video games and other actives.
Lastly, we get to enjoy the winter seasons by playing in the snow, making snow man, making snow angles. Another great thing about the winter season is that we get to drink hot chocolate and eat marshmallows. Specially for me the winter holidays are great because my moms birthday is coming up.
I like winter holidays because you have no stress. You get to spend time with your family and enjoy the season so do you like the winter holidays?

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